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Post by lemonpig on Apr 15, 2008 9:57:03 GMT 1
Come on, post the next chapter ! ;D
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Post by lara on Apr 17, 2008 18:17:06 GMT 1
You've Melody down to a tea Pam! No full stops just loads of fast talking! lol Good!
Not sure about everyone washing her down though! ;D
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Post by Katrina on Apr 17, 2008 18:40:27 GMT 1
This is fantastic Pam. You write the characters so realistically!
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Nick
Family – Louise
Is secretly in love with Dr Melody Bell!!!!!
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Post by Nick on Apr 17, 2008 22:33:15 GMT 1
Not sure about everyone washing her down though! ;D I liked that bit!!!!!!!! That was great Pam, and not just becuase Melody was in it!!!
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Post by lemonpig on Apr 18, 2008 0:08:20 GMT 1
Excellent !
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sidnancy
Patient – repeat prescription
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Post by sidnancy on Apr 18, 2008 18:33:25 GMT 1
So good! Thanks for this...just caught up on it, you've got a realk knack for character and writing.
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Post by crazyfrog on Apr 19, 2008 17:30:34 GMT 1
This is really good, but you see the problem is that you keep stopping it at all the crucial points! ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by crazyfrog on Apr 21, 2008 20:06:32 GMT 1
Go on...... ;D ;D
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Post by lemonpig on Apr 22, 2008 14:41:20 GMT 1
I'd like to know the end of course. But at the same time I don't want the story to end. Do you think you can solve my dilemma ? ;D
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Post by Katrina on Apr 23, 2008 15:43:53 GMT 1
Pam, this really is fantastic and you have a real knack for both writing the characters and coming up with fantastic cliffhangers!
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