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Post by rachel on Jan 19, 2011 21:04:01 GMT 1
Daniel had crashed overnight on Jimmi’s sofa as he knew Jimmi kept the key under one of the plant pots. The next day Jimmi walked downstairs to find Daniel on the sofa. ‘Hey what are you doing here,’ Jimmi asked. ‘I’m so sorry. I didn’t know where else to go because me and Lisa had a row last night about me still being in love with Zara. She’s so paranoid and then she chucked me out,’ Daniel said. ‘Well are you in love with Zara?’ Jimmi said. ‘I don’t know it’s confusing. I know I love Izzy though and I want to stay with her,’ Daniel replied. ‘If Izzy was Zara’s child would you be with Zara or Lisa?’ Jimmi asked. ‘Zara,’ Daniel said immediatley. ‘Look Daniel, I can’t tell you what you should do, but you need to think about who you really want because otherwise you are wasting everyone’s time.’ Jimmi said. ‘Thanks that was really helpful. I’ll leave you and Cherry now because I don’t want to get in the way of things,’ Daniel answered and then he walked out of the door. He was in deep thought about his life who he wanted in his life. Daniel remembered what Joe had said to him a couple of months ago when he was staying with them. ‘Should I be with Zara,’ he thought.
Cherry walked into the lounge a bit suprised. ‘Why is Daniel here?’ she said. ‘Fell out with Lisa again,’ Jimmi answered. ‘He keeps having arguements with her. Why doesn’t he just go back to Zara? They were so sweet together,’ Cherry said. ‘I know they are both clearly in love with each other, but Daniel’s not the best person at making good choices,’ Jimmi answered. ‘Do you think we should do something to make him see sense?’ Cherry asked. ‘No I think we’ve got to let them sort it out and get on with it,’ Jimmi replied. ‘Yeah I guess so, but it’s such a shame,’ Cherry said. ‘Well at least I made the right decision,’ Jimmi said leaning forward and kissing her. ‘I’m glad you did,’ Cherry said happily.
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Post by rachel on Jan 19, 2011 21:35:11 GMT 1
Sorry it's a bit rubbish at the moment not many Zaniel moments, but I'll work on that. I don't think I'm going to have enough time to update till Friday though
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Post by rachel on Jan 21, 2011 21:04:48 GMT 1
It had been a bright and sunny day but at the same time it had been bitterly cold as it was the middle of winter. Zara thought this was a metaphor for Daniel, he looks nice on the outside but in his heart he’s as cold as ice. She had had a very difficult day today and she sat at home thinking about the events which had taken place.
Zara had been on house calls that day so she didn’t have to face Daniel all day, but at the same time she hated house calls. Zara remembered when herself and Daniel used to joke about how much they hated house calls, ‘the glass is definetley half empty,’ they had both said at the same time. Her first patient had a foot problem where there toes had turned yellow with a fungal infection which Zara founs totally disgusting, and to make matters worse they could have just walked into the surgery. However this definetly was not the worst part of her day.
Zara then visited a patient who had just been sick. She was about 30 and she was very pretty. She had long blonde hair and her make up was perfectly done. Her husband was equally as good looking and you could see that he loved her so much because of the way he looked at her and acted around her. Zara was immediatley jealous of this as she thought that one day Daniel and her would have been like this. Her name was Emily and she told Zara her symptoms. Zara had immediatley known what was wrong with her or right with her which is what Zara thought. She was pregnant, but to make sure Zara gave Emily a pregnancy test. It came out positive but Emily’s reaction was not what Zara had expected. ‘I don’t really want this baby,’ Emily had said. ‘Don’t you want to think about this. You need to discuss this with your husband,’ Zara had replied. ‘It’s fine by me. I will stand by her whatever she chooses. I would prefer her to have the baby, but it’s her decision,’ her husband had said. ‘You are in a stable relationship wouldn’t it be better to have this baby?’ Zara had said trying to persuade her. ‘No I don’t like kids and I certainly don’t want them,’ Emily had said. This made Zara sick with jealously when Emily was just going to throw everything away. Emily had everything, a husband who loved her dearly and would do anything for her and her own child on the way. This was everything Zara couldn’t have. ‘Why couldn’t Emily be the infertile menopause one?’ Zara had thought.
The evening was drawing in and Zara was still upset and jealous of Emily. Then she heard a knock at the door. It was Kevin.
Meanwhile, Daniel had got to work early after staying over at Jimmi’s house. He saw Zara walk into the mill to get her patient list for her house calls. He made sure he was out of sight of Zara as he didn’t want her to feel uncomfortable. Daniel just stared at her. He was thinking about how beautiful she was compared to any other woman he had met. She had beautiful features and a very good dress sense. ‘She looked stunning,’ he was thinking, but he was also thinking about her personality. How he missed just talking to Zara and sharing things with her. Jimmi was watching Daniel with his fixed expression on Zara. ‘Why don’t you just speak to her? I’m sure she’ll take you back if you tell her how you feel,’ Jimmi had said. ‘I don’t know. I love her, but I also love Izzy,’ Daniel replied. ‘Daniel, If you go back to Zara it definetly will not affect your love for Izzy. You know you can love them both, but it’s your decision,’ Jimmi said.
Daniel had been thinking about it all day and he had decided to go back to Lisa’s house and discuss it with her. When he arrived he could smell a chicken casserole in the oven. ‘Lisa I need to talk to you,’ Daniel said. ‘Yeah we need to talk. We can’t keep going on like this,’ Lisa replied. ‘You were right. I still haven’t got over Zara,’ Daniel said calmly. ‘I know, are you going to go back to her,’ Lisa said. ‘I don’t know. I love Izzy so much I just want to see her,’ Daniel replied. ‘Well I guess we could work something out where you could hve her once a fortnight for a weekend like we did before,’ Lisa answered. ‘Thank you Lisa,’ Daniel said. He now felt completely released from the stress he had been under for the last 3 months. He didn’t have to worry about having an arguement every night with Lisa anymore. He was free to go back to Zara. He was so excited to tell Zara he loved her that he had bought her some red roses and a box of her favourite chocolate. When he arrived at her house Kevin’s car was outside. Daniel now felt the pain Zara had been feeling for the last 3 months.
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Post by rachel on Jan 22, 2011 11:28:44 GMT 1
Daniel stayed at Jimmi’s the night before as he didn’t know where else to go which was becoming a habit of Daniel’s. He knew that he had to see Zara this morning to tell her how much he loved her because all he wanted was for them to be back together, but had Zara moved on?
Meanwhile Zara had got into work early this morning and she was sitting at her desk trying to make a start on her mountain of paperwork she had to get through. There was a cold mist over Letherbridge which made everything outside seem grey and dull. Daniel walked in the room looking at Zara, ‘can we talk?’ he said. Zara suddenly heard her phone ringing and immediatley rejected the call as she didn’t want to be bothered. Then the phone rang again. This time she answered it. ‘Hello,’ Zara said. ‘Hello, Is this this Zara Carmichael speaking?’ the voice said. ‘Yeah it is,’ Zara replied. ‘I’m your fathers doctors. I’m sorry I’ve got some bad news for you,’ the doctor said. ‘What? What’s happened?’ Zara said with panic in her voice. ‘Your father is very ill with an aggressive form of cancer and we think he’s only got a week to live,’ the doctor said. Zara immediatley threw the phone on the floor in shock and she couldn’t move at all. Every muscle in her body was completely frozen. She couldn’t take it all in. Daniel saw her frozen expression and was confused. Zara then had tears streaming down her face. Daniel picked up the phone on the floor. ‘Hello,’ he said. ‘Could I speak to Miss Carmichael please,’ the doctor said. ‘I don’t think she’s in a state to talk,’ Daniel replied. ‘Well I’ll give you some details about the ward and hospital which you need to pass on, and make sure she’s ok,’ the doctor said. When Daniel put down the phone he went straight to Zara and hugged her so tightly it almost hurt her. ‘I’m so sorry Zara for what I’ve done. I want to be there for you now Zara,’ Daniel said. He did not want to let go of Zara, but he had to as he needed to take Zara to the hospital. On the way out of the Mill Daniel told Julia what was going on and ofcourse Julia gave them time off.
When they were in the car Zara was still crying and couldn’t speak as she was still in shock. Daniel said to her, ‘Zara I love you and I’m going to be there for you throughout this and forever. I left Lisa last night as I’m in love with you. I drove round to your house, but Kevin’s car was there so I stayed at Jimmi’s. Infact I’ve stayed at Jimmi’s for the last few nights. I’m so sorry for not being there for you for the last few months, but I love you and I will always love you.’
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Post by bec2010 on Jan 22, 2011 11:45:09 GMT 1
Aww poor Zara! However Brilliant update x
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Post by sarahlovesdoctors on Jan 22, 2011 17:22:31 GMT 1
Poor Zara </3
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rachel
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Post by rachel on Jan 23, 2011 12:36:03 GMT 1
I probably won't be able to update for the next few days as I want to spend more time on the next couple of scenes, because I want to portray it well and it's going to be hard to right.
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Post by rachel on Jan 24, 2011 20:40:05 GMT 1
Daniel and Zara walked silently through the hospital holding hands. The hospital had a lot of people around. Nurses and Doctors were walking back and fourth. Zara wasn’t aware of what was going on. She just wanted to see her father. ‘Zara,’ Jed called as soon as he saw her. ‘Daddy, I love you so much,’ Zara replied hugging her father whilest Daniel stood behind her. Jed saw Daniel and then said, ‘Are you the guy who was responsible for my girl being miserable for the last few months?’ ‘Yeah, I’m so sorry, but I’m here now for her,’ Daniel said with guilt in his voice. ‘Good because she’s going to need someone to look after her,’ Jed said hugging his daughter.‘You know I would have loved to walk you down the aisle my love, but just remember me on that day,’ he added. ‘I will,’ Zara said with a tear running down her face. She was so happy to be in her fathers arms but at the same time she was going to loose him in a matter of days. ‘I’ll give you a little privacy for an hour or two,’ Daniel said not wanting to intrude on anything. ‘Thanks,’ Zara said looking at him.
When Daniel had gone Jed said to Zara, ‘I’m so proud of you Zara. Everything you’ve achieved its amazing just remember that,’ Zara looked at him with a tear in her eye, ‘thank you Daddy. I’m so proud of you too building your own business and surviving those years in prison which you shouldn’t have been there.’ Jed then took a letter out of his bag. ‘I have a few things in storage which me and your mother wanted you to have. It has her beautiful wedding dress you could wear one day and some family antiques.’ ‘Thank you Daddy,’ Zara could bearly get the words out as she waas crying now. Jed held Zara’s hand and looked at her, ‘Zara its ging to be ok. I’m going to be with your mother. She was so beautiful like you my darling and I’m going to be with her soon.’ ‘I love you though,’ Zara said with tears falling down her cheek and her mascara completely smudged down her face. ‘Daddy your the most important thing in my life, I love you so much,’ she added. ‘My darling you’ll be ok without me. It looks like you’ve got someone to look after you now. I love you too Zara,’ Jed said then hugging her again.
Meanwhile Daniel was walking around the town about 5 minutes from the hospital. He was thinking about how much Zara was going through and how much she meant to him. He was never going to leave her again. All those months without being with Zara had been like torture to Daniel. He was so happy that Zara was back in his arms, but at the same time he felt the emotion that she was feeling, because he really loved her. Suddenly Daniel had an idea. He immediatley thought it would never work, but no matter how hard he tried he couldn’t get the idea out of his head. It was what Daniel wanted and what he dreamed about, but would it happen in reality? Would it work?
Daniel walked into the ward where Jed and Zara were. He saw Zara’s make up smudged down her face and went over and hugged her tightly. ‘I love you so much,’ he whispered in her ear, ‘I’ve got something to ask you.’ Zara sat down on the chair by her fathers bed. ‘Zara, I love you so much more than you can imagine, and I want to be with you for the rest of my life and never leave you,’ Daniel said, and then he knelt and held Zara’s left hand. ‘If it’s alright with your father. I promise to love you for the rest of your life and you will never be alone, so Miss Carmichael will you marry me?’ Daniel said with a small tear in his eye. Zara was shocked! She didn’t know what to say. She wanted to say no as Zara Carmichael isn’t really the marriage type, but she looked into his eyes and couldn’t imagine anything better. Her and Daniel always together it would be her dream. She still loved him even if he was an idiot before. ‘Yes Daniel,’ Zara said with so much clarity and happiness and she started crying again. She had cried so much today but this time it was happiness. ‘I’m so glad your getting married, my darling. You need someone to look after you and someone when I’m gone,’ Jed said, ‘I would have loved to have been at the ceremony but your going to look so beautiful.’ ‘I had an idea while I was out. Jed, I know how much it would mean to Zara if you were at the wedding and I think we could make it possible,’ Daniel said. ‘How?’ Zara replied with tears still rolling down her face. ‘We could get married tomorrow in the chapel. A nice quiet ceremony if you like with your father there,’ Daniel said looking at Zara. ‘I cannot imagine anything better,’ Zara said with so much happiness in her voice, ‘I love you.’ Then Daniel went to Zara and kissed her.
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Post by rachel on Jan 31, 2011 18:25:25 GMT 1
Sorry I haven't updated in so long. I've had lots of work to do. A levels are so hard :/. I'm going to try an update tonight, if not I should have an update by Wednesday.
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Post by Decani on Jan 31, 2011 19:02:46 GMT 1
I can totally sympathise with that. Are you AS or A2? The workload is mental, it's gone from "do this essay for a week on Monday" at GCSE to "I expect this essay in the next time I see you." "But Sirrrr, that's tomorrow!" *Teacher shrugs* o.O Thank goodness I love my subjects. If I didn't, something significantly criminal would have happened to my school. Like arson.
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