Post by doctorwhovian on Oct 1, 2012 15:21:27 GMT 1
Hello, my Dear Friends^^ I'm a Writer from Germany, and this Fic I have written, is the first One, I ever have written in English. This means, that I would be really glad, if you wouldn't be to hard, to the Way I write, because I really just learn to write in English^^ So please forgive me if something is not correct. I'm happy about any Kind of Comment, and Review, and would be glad if you give a Chance to this Fanfiction.
CHARACTERS (so far):
The eleventh Doctor, Amy, J.C. (my own), Gaius Ambrosius (my own),
SUMMARY:
The eleventh Doctor,meets a great Person from Human History, who he admires very much. The Reason for this meeting is, that someone changed something very important about this Persons Timeline, and the Doctor tries to find out what it is. And as he discovers it, the Doctor has a bigger Problem on his hands, than he ever had before....
The Great Paradox
A Doctor Who Story
Prolog
The Hovering of the Tardis was striking trough the Night, as it started to dematerialize itself, from the good old Streets of 1970th London. The eleventh Doctor, was standing inside of it, running around his console, trying to fix the Tardis to some Point in Time, he tried to travel to. It happens very often, that the Tardis is bringing him to other places, than the ones he actually wants to visit, cause the Tardis has it's own head. And every Time, Amy was watching the Doctor, starting his Time Machine, it was like watching a Husband fighting with his Wife. Short said: It was hilarious. Martha was loving out lout, as the Doctor started to scream at the Console and, Eleventh trough a slightly, angry Look at her. "Whats so funny?" He asked, and Amy stopped herself from laughing. " Nothing" she said, and smiled guiltless back at him. " Where do we want to travel next?" she asked, and with "we" she meant actually him. Alot off Times, he asked her, which place she would like to see the most, but sometimes, he just hat that extrem Urge to show her something, and then noone could stop him from doing that, or at least trying to do it. Like it was already said, the Tardis had her own head.
" I want you to show the greatest Empire which ever existed, being reigned by the greatest Emperor of all the Universes." he said, with kind of a Fanboy-Voice, and Amy had to laugh again. "Oh, I never here you talk this way about someone. At least, never about some undemocratic Leader. Normaly you hate those." she noticed, and the Eleventh blushed a little bit. "Now, he is a very special Emperor. If you ask me, there was no greater Leader of Human Kind, after you have left Planet Earth. You had alot of Empires established in your Time, created a lot of great Worlds and Realms, but none of them, was ever this bright, and this amazing than the one I'm talking about right now." he explained and the sound of his Voice was still the same. Amy looked at him curious: "AFTER, whe have left Earth? So you mean we will travel to the Future again?" The Doctor smiled.
"Not just to the Future, Pond. We will travel into the 53th Century, actually into the Year 5267, the greatest Year of his Life. The Year he saved your Kind, and they named him Ruler." "Who actually?" In Amy Voice lied a impatient Tone, like she had enough of the Half-Answers the Doctor was giving her. The Doctor stoped, playing around with the Console, and as a Final act of his Doing, he pushed around some big handle. " Who? I talk about the Great Ceasar Julianus Celsus, Son of Gaius Ambrosius, Hero of the Seven Fields of Darkness, Emperor of the Third Roman Empire, Ruler of the whole Galaxy, and Whealer of the Unkown Weapon!" He said it, with such enthusiasm, and with such Inspiration, that Amy couldn't do different than starting to admire this Person, herself. Someone who would get the Doctor to become all Fanboy-ish must be really, impressive.
"Whats the unkown Weapon? " she asked, and the Doctor started to grin really bright. "Thats the greatest Thing: I don't know!" he blurred out, and Amy started to look at him, being very confused. "Ok, this I really don't understand. What does this mean." she asked, and the Doctor was still grining. "Do you remember this one Time as we saved this Space Colony from the Daleks?", Amy was nogging. " It was like a Week ago, I think." "You're completely right! It was actually the 60th Century, and I found there a old catalogic Informations about this Empire. I allready knew about it of course, and also about Julianus, but that was the first Time I heard about this Weapon." The Explanations of the Doctor didn't really solve Amys confusion, and so she needed a Moment bevor she asked the next Question. "But I thought, you would know everything what happens in Time. I mean really everything, at least in the slidest Way."
"And normally, thats the case," the Doctor answered and made a little Pause." And do you know why, I don't know it Amy?" he asked her, and she looked at him, a little annoyed. "Why?" "I don't know" he loved about his own Answer, still very existed, and then he ran to the Door, reaching forward to the Grip, and as he hold it, he took a last Pause. "Are you ready Amy, to see something I don't know?" and as he smiled at her, with a adventours Look, she smiled the same Way back. " I'm always ready, Doctor." and the Eleventh, started to open the Door: "Let's take a look, than."
CHARACTERS (so far):
The eleventh Doctor, Amy, J.C. (my own), Gaius Ambrosius (my own),
SUMMARY:
The eleventh Doctor,meets a great Person from Human History, who he admires very much. The Reason for this meeting is, that someone changed something very important about this Persons Timeline, and the Doctor tries to find out what it is. And as he discovers it, the Doctor has a bigger Problem on his hands, than he ever had before....
The Great Paradox
A Doctor Who Story
Prolog
The Hovering of the Tardis was striking trough the Night, as it started to dematerialize itself, from the good old Streets of 1970th London. The eleventh Doctor, was standing inside of it, running around his console, trying to fix the Tardis to some Point in Time, he tried to travel to. It happens very often, that the Tardis is bringing him to other places, than the ones he actually wants to visit, cause the Tardis has it's own head. And every Time, Amy was watching the Doctor, starting his Time Machine, it was like watching a Husband fighting with his Wife. Short said: It was hilarious. Martha was loving out lout, as the Doctor started to scream at the Console and, Eleventh trough a slightly, angry Look at her. "Whats so funny?" He asked, and Amy stopped herself from laughing. " Nothing" she said, and smiled guiltless back at him. " Where do we want to travel next?" she asked, and with "we" she meant actually him. Alot off Times, he asked her, which place she would like to see the most, but sometimes, he just hat that extrem Urge to show her something, and then noone could stop him from doing that, or at least trying to do it. Like it was already said, the Tardis had her own head.
" I want you to show the greatest Empire which ever existed, being reigned by the greatest Emperor of all the Universes." he said, with kind of a Fanboy-Voice, and Amy had to laugh again. "Oh, I never here you talk this way about someone. At least, never about some undemocratic Leader. Normaly you hate those." she noticed, and the Eleventh blushed a little bit. "Now, he is a very special Emperor. If you ask me, there was no greater Leader of Human Kind, after you have left Planet Earth. You had alot of Empires established in your Time, created a lot of great Worlds and Realms, but none of them, was ever this bright, and this amazing than the one I'm talking about right now." he explained and the sound of his Voice was still the same. Amy looked at him curious: "AFTER, whe have left Earth? So you mean we will travel to the Future again?" The Doctor smiled.
"Not just to the Future, Pond. We will travel into the 53th Century, actually into the Year 5267, the greatest Year of his Life. The Year he saved your Kind, and they named him Ruler." "Who actually?" In Amy Voice lied a impatient Tone, like she had enough of the Half-Answers the Doctor was giving her. The Doctor stoped, playing around with the Console, and as a Final act of his Doing, he pushed around some big handle. " Who? I talk about the Great Ceasar Julianus Celsus, Son of Gaius Ambrosius, Hero of the Seven Fields of Darkness, Emperor of the Third Roman Empire, Ruler of the whole Galaxy, and Whealer of the Unkown Weapon!" He said it, with such enthusiasm, and with such Inspiration, that Amy couldn't do different than starting to admire this Person, herself. Someone who would get the Doctor to become all Fanboy-ish must be really, impressive.
"Whats the unkown Weapon? " she asked, and the Doctor started to grin really bright. "Thats the greatest Thing: I don't know!" he blurred out, and Amy started to look at him, being very confused. "Ok, this I really don't understand. What does this mean." she asked, and the Doctor was still grining. "Do you remember this one Time as we saved this Space Colony from the Daleks?", Amy was nogging. " It was like a Week ago, I think." "You're completely right! It was actually the 60th Century, and I found there a old catalogic Informations about this Empire. I allready knew about it of course, and also about Julianus, but that was the first Time I heard about this Weapon." The Explanations of the Doctor didn't really solve Amys confusion, and so she needed a Moment bevor she asked the next Question. "But I thought, you would know everything what happens in Time. I mean really everything, at least in the slidest Way."
"And normally, thats the case," the Doctor answered and made a little Pause." And do you know why, I don't know it Amy?" he asked her, and she looked at him, a little annoyed. "Why?" "I don't know" he loved about his own Answer, still very existed, and then he ran to the Door, reaching forward to the Grip, and as he hold it, he took a last Pause. "Are you ready Amy, to see something I don't know?" and as he smiled at her, with a adventours Look, she smiled the same Way back. " I'm always ready, Doctor." and the Eleventh, started to open the Door: "Let's take a look, than."