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Post by iris on Jun 17, 2005 19:02:10 GMT 1
but i think the end is quite optimistic... nice way to look at it. when are we going to read a real HAPPY story of yours? love xxx i
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Post by Katrina on Jun 17, 2005 19:32:02 GMT 1
i have no idea, happy stories take longer to write (at least for me).
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Post by AG on Jul 16, 2005 17:08:51 GMT 1
this is amazing! I am in tears reading it. poor Sarah, you got her personality spot on. the ending was perfect.
AG
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Post by CW on Jul 16, 2005 18:05:29 GMT 1
absolutely amazing. you got the emotions just right, you got Helen and Sarah's personality exact as well as Claire and Dan. By the end i felt so sorry for Sarah, blaming herself for the death of baby Angelina Avari. the epilouge was so beautiful. The banner at the beginning of the fic was amazing (did you draw it yourself?) the picture of Sarah looks a lot like Andrea, you should be very proud and the baby is beautiful. you are a very talented writer, and should keep up the good work.
love
CW
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Post by Katrina on Jul 16, 2005 19:28:26 GMT 1
thanks for the reviews CW and AG, i'm glad you liked Time to Fly.
yes i did draw the picture of Sarah myself, the picture of the baby is actually a picture of myself when i was a baby ;D
anyway thanks for reading
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