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Post by Katrina on Oct 24, 2005 14:56:35 GMT 1
excellent! and very funny!! Pandora seems erm interesting
can't wait for more
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Post by Angel on Oct 24, 2005 18:33:36 GMT 1
Ooh this is brilliant, I can't wait for the next part ;D ;D
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Post by Katrina on Nov 2, 2005 13:35:14 GMT 1
ooh the plot thickens. poor Sarah-of-things-that-could-have-been, Nathans a complete <insert word here>
can't wait to find out what Ronnie'll see
excellent as always Pam! A real gem of a story.
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Post by Katrina on Nov 7, 2005 13:40:20 GMT 1
excellent!! Pandora and her box are very intriguing. aw poor Ronnie, his alternate life's certainly different. and i can just imagine George in her 60s still dressing as she does now. and that one heck of an amount of grandchildren!! and Helen with grandchildrem ;D strange to think of little Claire as a grown up with kids.
can't wait to read/see (such descriptions create brilliant visual picture) more
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Post by Katrina on Nov 15, 2005 12:36:46 GMT 1
ooh another excellent part. love the way Greg could have turned out (shame about having to cancel stuff)
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Post by iris on Nov 15, 2005 23:02:11 GMT 1
WoW!
you prove to be a very interesting writer. your first fic was a normal development of the ria storyline as it was; your second was a brilliant mystery and now this: a wonderfully written comical "what if". it is really another great idea! i wonder where you get your inspiration from.
sorry that i write my feedback only now- was a bit lazy in reading and writing lately with all the traveling. so here's my feedback until now:
prologue: brilliant. just brilliant. i can actually see pandora (and miss pollard too) when she talks. great character developing. liked julia's reaction to her.
sarah's story: very accurate. can actually be imagined as the natural development of sarah and nathan's relationship. i remember him acts just like that when he was tasha's boyfriend (meeting "mates" and ignoring her). also his "not exactly" was so much exactly like him! brilliant!
ronnie's story: well, i can not say i see any problem in not having kids and a big family - on the contrary, but i do sympathise with ronnie who still loves george and can't bear the thought of not being with her forever. great character developing, again. loved helen going for "some serious shopping"... oh my dear helen: it is so so you even after all these years!
greg's story: hmmmmm, interesting! can't say too much before i read the second half, but hey, you've got a great idea again. greg as a celeb. wonder if he wanted to be on tv just cause ollie was on the radio once....
come on pam, don't wait a week before the next bit. we want to know more and the sooner the better!
please post soon!
love it!
xxx
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Post by michali on Nov 16, 2005 20:08:47 GMT 1
Well Well, what a pleasure! I am certainly on the right board whether or not I get to watch the show! Just brillinat Pam. I think I have already developed addiction here...
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Post by Katrina on Nov 19, 2005 14:07:07 GMT 1
aw at Greg after seeing alternate future. and angry Sarah and Mac ;D! hehe at Vicky Pollard alike Pandora.
excellent as usual Pam. can't wait for more.
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Post by PamA on Nov 20, 2005 23:40:07 GMT 1
I really appreciate your feed back. It means a great deal to me to know that you're enjoying what I write, and it also gives me the impetus to carry on. Thanks guys!!
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Post by michali on Nov 20, 2005 23:57:43 GMT 1
You are mostly welcome. Anything else we can offer you to encourage your writing? I believe the board will do much to get the next section out soon  ;D  |
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