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Post by Katrina on Nov 22, 2005 14:27:37 GMT 1
< me WOAH!! Helen's married to Marc and he's a slave driver. excellent as always. and the ending i didn't expect Marc. also hehe at Helen and Pandora. 'doctorish' ;D can't wait for more
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Family - Jack
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Post by Angel on Nov 22, 2005 16:28:57 GMT 1
I've just caught up with this...excellent as always Can't wait for the next part ;D
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Post by iris on Nov 22, 2005 20:56:01 GMT 1
cool and very much probable....i bet marc misses his good old days in the army....poor kids. also liked helen wanting to have some fun in the morning...jack wouldn't have said no to that!
brilliant tension building till we find our who's the hubby... perfect! well pam, when's the next part coming?! p l e a s e ! xxx i
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Post by Katrina on Nov 27, 2005 17:53:07 GMT 1
wonderful!! especially the line about unmaking beds ;D ;D
i can't wait for the next bit
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Post by Katrina on Dec 1, 2005 18:34:13 GMT 1
excellent. Pandora is utterly hilarious!!
i can't wait for more
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Post by michali on Dec 1, 2005 22:01:45 GMT 1
Allright Pam, I wil watch Little Britain tonight (for the first time).... ;D
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Post by Katrina on Dec 8, 2005 14:06:13 GMT 1
< me oh my, excellent as always! i really don't trust Harry. can't wait for the next part
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Post by Katrina on Dec 16, 2005 12:35:57 GMT 1
< me again oh my giddy aunt! Pandora sure is a strange one. this is absolutely amazing Pam!! it's so entriging and mystical. i really can't wait for the next part
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Post by Katrina on Jan 5, 2006 13:46:10 GMT 1
wow this is brilliant. Pandora is hilarious.
i can't wait to read more
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Post by iris on Jan 16, 2006 18:15:27 GMT 1
the fact i'm lazy at feedback doesn't mean i don't read and like.
today's bit was very whole. i like the way each alternative life you pick for your characters is totally different from the others.
so, who's next? and when will we know a bit more about the box's owner?
please write more frequently! love xxx i
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