Post by NaomiGemma on Dec 7, 2008 15:51:01 GMT 1
Changes- Continued
I’m putting this here although it was a doctor’s episode, as it doesn’t contain any doctor’s people. Other than the odd guest part. Feel free to move it though
Information- this fiction is a continue of the Episode Changes. I wanted to know what happened after she left. So I’m making it up. It will start way at the start. Before Liz arrived into their lives.
Part One-
Bringing her knees to the chest, her breathing laboured, she couldn’t stop the tears falling. “I can’t make. Noise. He’ll. Come back. And…” she spoke in a whisper, such a quiet one. Managing to stop crying she carefully took of her ripped tights putting them in the bin she managed to stumble to the shower despite the pain. Bending over once she got out she cupped her chest. It was bruised she might of broken a rib as well. Walking into the living room Keith was there.
“Keith…”
“Yes?”
“I’ve hurt my ribs.”
“Oh dear. How’d you do that?”
She wanted to shout that he did it! Not her!
“Fell in the shower.”
She would have never told him if it wasn’t for the pain and if he hit her there again it would pierce her lung. He stood up told he wanted his lunch NOW and went to the phone. While forcing herself to cook she heard him talk.
“Hello. Yes it’s my wife. Elaine Finney. She’s hurt her ribs. 1.15? Yes that’s perfect! Thanks.” He took a stride through to where she was struggling to stand straight.
“1.15 with Dr Woodson. ”
“Thank. You”
He was in a good mood today she thought to herself. Normally he would have ignored her. Made her struggle on. It wasn’t long before they needed to be there. Elaine struggled out of the taxi having left Keith at home. She stumbled to the centre where Vivian stood.
“Yes? Can I help you?” Vivian instantly noticed the woman in front of her was very thin and struggling to stay stood up.
“Erm. Elaine Finney.”
“Oh yes. It won’t be long. Are you Ok?”
“Yes. Yes. I’ll just sit down.”
About ten minutes later she was called through. Wandering through the confusing corridor she finally found the door with DR G WOODSON on it. Struggling she pushed the door after knocking on it but it didn’t work. She tried again but failed once more. Sighing she went for a third attempt with the door opened and there stood a normally colourfully dressed Dr Woodson. She gave a sympathetic smile to Elaine.
“Sorry. I…”
“It’s alright. Come in and sit down.”
“Thank you” she spoke as she shut the door.
“So what can I do for you?”
“I’ve hurt my ribs.”
“Oh ouch! How’d you do that?”
“Ah slipped in the shower.”
“Ooh. Can I have a look?”
“Yeah”
“Okay. Just pop yourself up on the bed and lift up your top.”
She did as she was told nervously. George looked around her ribs. It was quite simple. She could see all her ribs and two were clearly broken. No X-ray needed! Then she noticed something else!
“Elanie.,.You didn’t fall did you?”