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Post by bec2010 on Dec 22, 2010 0:53:25 GMT 1
Hi everyone, everyone has amazing fan fics and i feel a bit amateur, but since i have reached the turning point in my short story i was just looking for a few responses, are happy with the way its going? what are your views on the turning point? and i have two ways of taking the story, so i was just wondering what peoples idea's were of what was to happen and then i can tailor it around everyone. Thanks xx  |
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Post by Decani on Dec 22, 2010 1:00:12 GMT 1
I'd literally only just made a topic for your fic when you posted this :L Anyway, this was my immediate reaction... *Gulps* it's brilliant, you haven't half left us on edge! Blimey... I do love your writing style, even if the timeline is a little illogical (but hey, it's soapland - what d'you expect? :L) I'd loooove to read more and am just hoping that you won't leave us hanging for too long! Great stuff As for the direction of the story, I vote you choose. The writer's opinion is always going to be the best: it's your story and if you're passionate about your writing we'll all get that and enjoy it, no matter what the content! |
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Post by iheartdaniel on Dec 22, 2010 1:02:27 GMT 1
Goodness! Don't leave me hanging like that!
I agree, you should choose where you want to go with it, will probably work best that way. However, my vote is for a happy ending, love the way you have been hinting that this may lead to a discovery about Zara's health anyway.
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Post by bec2010 on Dec 22, 2010 1:10:49 GMT 1
i know it is a bit illogical but i wanted to quicken the story to this point as much as possible, this is when i feel that i needs to be the most detailed and I'm so glad yous both like it! Well i was going to go to bed, but i really cannot be that cruel and leave yous both hanging, so I'm going to write the next part and it will hopefully be up tonight/this morning xx |
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Post by bec2010 on Dec 22, 2010 2:15:17 GMT 1
The next installment is up, not a lot about Zara but it gives away a lot of information, i will post the rest tomorrow! Hope everyone enjoy's and doesn't go to bed unhappy, sorry!! xx
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Post by Decani on Dec 22, 2010 3:18:25 GMT 1
Ahh, brilliant bit of angsty writing there. I love a little angst, I do  It's great, just enough emotion, not too cloying from Daniel's point of view... I like, I like a lot. Anyway, I really should be going to bed now, but I look forward to the next installment - impressed by your post rate, I must say! |
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Post by bec2010 on Dec 22, 2010 11:58:45 GMT 1
Thanks, i know I'm surprised myself at how much I've wrote! Although i have always loved English, writing short stories and reading; once i get engrossed i cannot stop  Right i am working on the next part now xx |
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Post by bec2010 on Dec 22, 2010 15:07:03 GMT 1
Okay the next two parts are up now!! ;D They are rather long sorry and sorry to leave it at such a sad end, but there will be more coming so this isn't the end of the story. I hope you have all enjoyed it so far, and please BBC if you read this forum and fan fics in NO WAY do we want Zara to die, because you will have a lot of unhappy viewers!!! It was just a way i thought would explore her and Daniels feelings really well. Ill try and post some more later on tonight, maybe even a little snip it this afternoon!! Although I'm going to have to do some revision oops!! :  xx |
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Post by bec2010 on Dec 22, 2010 17:42:14 GMT 1
Revision consisted of writing 2 words on a piece of paper and then i came up with a great twist to the story and couldn't concentrate. So i came back to my Fan Fic and well its all done ;D It had to have a happy ending due to it being Christmas Enjoy!! ;D  xxx |
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Post by Decani on Dec 22, 2010 18:56:16 GMT 1
*Squeals* ahh, I loved it! ;D It did get a bit hairy there for a moment but everything worked out and it became the cutest thing EVER. Eek. I hope you write more soon (though not at the expense of revision - I have a habit of doing that, my A2 grades are going to be horrific in the summer if I don't pull my socks up and stop myself writing for a while :L). I really enjoyed the whole fic and my impatient nature applauds your quick posting Thanks for a whirlwind couple of days in Zaniel land! Xxxx |
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It's great, just enough emotion, not too cloying from Daniel's point of view... I like, I like a lot. Anyway, I really should be going to bed now, but I look forward to the next installment - impressed by your post rate, I must say!
Right i am working on the next part now 
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